91 Banana road
Fruit Valley
0000
Dear mum,
I can hear People talking. I see my friends and green trees and green grass and blue sky . I can smell my yummy and delicious ham burger. It tastes soft and juicy. I can feel the crust of my bun. It feels crunchy.
Where Am I?
From,
Diego
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Reflection:
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses. I enjoyed writing about a mystery place. It was tricky to think of ideas. Next I will try to add more details.
1 comment:
You have created proper sentences and included describing words! Well done Diego!
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