Thursday, April 5, 2018

Mystery Letter

                                                                                              91 Banana road
                                                                                               Fruit Valley
                                                                                               0000



Dear mum,

I can hear People talking.  I see my friends and green trees and green grass and blue sky . I can smell my  yummy and delicious ham burger.  It tastes soft and juicy. I can feel the crust of my bun. It feels crunchy.

Where Am I?

From,
Diego
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Reflection:

We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.  I enjoyed writing about a mystery place.  It was tricky to  think of ideas.  Next I will try to add more details.                                                                                         

1 comment:

Mrs N said...

You have created proper sentences and included describing words! Well done Diego!